Security Framework that Enhances the Banking Systems to Maintain Data Privacy and Security Paper The topic rejected with following comments.. Can you write

Security Framework that Enhances the Banking Systems to Maintain Data Privacy and Security Paper The topic rejected with following comments.. Can you write I’ll give $20 more

First and most importantly, I still do not understand the main question(s)/problem that you’re looking to explore. This should be clearly stated in a concise manner. You have provided a lot of background, but it doesn’t really lead to a problem besides noting that Big Data Analytics needs to be better used. However, that really isn’t a clear problem.

Big Data Analytics and how it impacts industry and even banking is not novel. There have been numerous studies that focus on these types of questions. How is your research going to be different? What problem/questions will you explore that has not been explored in the past? Please note that you have included articles from 2014 and 2016. When it comes to data analytics, this is severely outdated.

The problem for this topic needs to be clearly stated and should be novel. •References older than 2 years do not support assertions based on the current state of technology. Remove older references. • Big Data Analytics and how it impacts industry and even banking is not novel. There have been numerous studies that focus on these types of questions. How is your research going to be different? • What problem/questions will you explore that has not been explored in the past?

Q: Write 400 to 500 words

Here are some things to consider:

Identify a topic in your specialization. (For IT students, Information Technology is not a topic, however, Millennial’s perceptions of smart phone technology could be a topic).
What is the cited problem? The problem you want to address has to come from the literature, and be cited, who are saying there are problems.
What is the population you would like to address?
What methodology are you planning on using? (If you are unsure, do you plan on a quantitative or qualitative study?
Locate at least one article related to your topic. What was the research question in the study? Who were the participants in the study? What findings were reported?

Core Courses :

Course 1 – IT Importance in Strategic Planning

Course 2 – IT in a Global Economy

Course 3 – Information Governance

Course 4 – Emerging Threats and Countermeasures

Course 5 – Enterprise Risk Management

Course 6 – Data Science and Big Data Analytics