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Need to edit/rewrite the paper with the comments provide by professor:
“The first two sentences were good, but the next three are confusing.
Not really. Three strikes came out of the “just deserts” penal philosophy which is concerned with what the convict has done, not what they may do in the future.
The last sentence is just jammed in there for no obvious reason.
Eligibility for what?
Who is saying that inconsistent application of three strikes leads to prison overcrowding?
The whole paragraph can be deleted. It’s a college paper in Justice Studies. Pretty safe assumption that well, now that I had to look at it more, its just wrong. Justice systems do not enhanced rules, that is not there role. Plus you are repeating yourself. I had to stop and move on at this point.
Were they right?
Why does the topic of the paper only begin to be addressed on page 5? Should be in the first paragraph.
What is with introducing race? Isn’t the paper about three strikes and prison overcrowding – which I am still waiting to read about.”
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